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Old 12-07-2007, 11:46 AM
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twisted story...
a memory of a state of mind
delving into the feeling
of becoming completly numb...
paralysed with dreaded doubt....
fear..
i plunge into irreversable nightmares
in my life, metaphors and reality mash...


i dont know who you are
but i have come to catch you
at brief times to be inside of me...
in a flash of a second
i see the twisted despair..
and i tremble to admit that you might be me....

your face is haunting
it reaks of insincerity...
you've lost all trace of interest in beauty
and your expressions show that your lost in a state of conflict
dragging up memories of past humility

and i see the times back then
when i listened to the mouths of cannibles that had great love for children
that ate at my shallowness
they fed on my cowardness
they contributed to my fear to question...
leading to childhood rebellion
but i always burned with the need
to have every answer

and then came the irrational conversations....
in my head to those i could never stand up to...
to those who said they loved me...
but in the next moment they screamed silently that they knew nothing of me...

i never felt so alone...
i never felt so apart...
they cut at my soul
and drove into my thoughts...

holding me back.. pushing me away..
control... more like tyrancy
i felt like i was the lone soldier
dying on the field of my own country....
shot down by my own natives...
rejected by those who where "close" to me...

the indifference so cold....
brought on by years of torment...
my heart understood thier past...
but the actions of the present could not be forgotten...
my soul begged them to see
that i was reaching out...
i was still a child in need...
but they where children just like me...
my own blood
my very own mother, father, family....

love was illusive...
redemption a twisted story....
God's judgement fortold by man...
molded by earth bound, authorities hands
any elder i knew...
lied for revenge...
they never knew what they where doing..
but the sins of generations where passed
from the dead to the living...
now all life is as good as damned[/color]
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Old 12-08-2007, 03:16 PM
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my soul begged them to see
that i was reaching out...
i was still a child in need...

Greetings blood:

Yes indeed a twisted story. "A child in need" I believe those were the lines that spoke the loudest. The longing for involvement and love.

I heard every word. Thanks for posting and sharing your thoughts. A good poem and heartfelt read.

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sally friend...

thank you for giving me a chance to be heard againe...
and for your honest caring and understanding...


much needed and appreciated...



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EEP!
so emotionally charged, bravo!

but...GAH! I was in such a good mood ...and now this made me sad-but at least we know your poem was wonderfully effective :|
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anyways, thanks for the write....



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Scary and effective it is. Twisted, definitely. Thanks for the read



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