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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 09-13-2008, 04:45 AM
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Under a Moon-lit Sapphire-Topaz Sky
Under a Moonlit Sapphire-Topaz Sky
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Projecting its glorious beauty
Up into the Sapphire-Topaz sky
Clouds radiating in the dusk
As I look into her beautiful blue eyes
With harmony the ocean’s waves sing
As the sun fades away
The waves sparkle and glistens
In a sea-green foam display
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While the darkness of night
Slowly flows into morning
Giving her a symbol of my love
She is surprised by a velvet red rose
As we lie down in the sand
I softly whisper “I love you”
As the waves roll upon the white sand beach
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I breathe the air off her sensual lips
As she softly whispers “ I'm Yours”
Our hearts beating as one in quiet peace
Under the alabaster moon lit sky
Knowing we’ll be holding each other
Forever in paradise
No longer two lonely stars in the dark of night
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Old 09-13-2008, 08:28 AM
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Ahh Bear .... such a romantic poem. You really know how to weave that beautiful magic around a womans heart with your words hon. I so enjoy each of your works. You are a Master of romantic poetry Bear.


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Thank you so very much Mysty for you fantastic comment and for reading my poems
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Dear Bear,

Such beautiful language and images in this poem. I LOVE the combination of Sapphire and Topaz...stunning! Keep'm coming Bear!

ps....one lil' suggestion...the Im Yours...perhaps should be I'm

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Thank you so much Painted for your suggestion and fantastic comment
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