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Old 12-01-2006, 02:57 PM
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Undying Passion
Undying Passion

Passion lingers in the air I see by the dampness of your hair
that you need just a moment to breathe
before I fulfill my never-ending need
to sink slowly inside you and become one
to merge our bodies under the sun
to feel the quivering of your pulse
the quickening breath and sharpened kiss
oh, for nothing would I miss
the look of love glistening in your eyes
your tender touch upon my cheek
it makes me positively weak
for love with you is a roller coaster
up one side and down the other
never knowing which little bend
will bring it all to a perfect end
only to start all over again!
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Erotic pace with tender wordplay. I love the simplicity of these lines. The message of love is clear to your readers, nomadicrhymer. Nice to read you.

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Hey NOMADICRHYMER - very nice piece! This poem has erotic elements yeah - but the PASSION.... your poem speaks to me of soulmates enjoying a tumultuous rendezvous of AWESOME SEX lol...

To sink slowly inside you and become one
To merge our bodies under the sun
To feel the quivering of your pulse

Loved those lines - especially the "becoming one" part - All I can say is - It surely must be nice!

Nice write - Thanx for sharing it.

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Hey, Ms.J!!! happy you liked this one...just going back to make sure I've been courteous an replying to all my commentators...thanks for reading!!

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