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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 07-19-2007, 12:48 AM
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Unloved Flower
Unloved flower, dark and deep
Like the blood you often weep
Sweet elixir on your breath
Crown of thorns until your death
Wayward winds beat you down
In love’s pain, you always drown
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Dear Danette,

I swore you wrote this for me. lol. Seriously, I love the brevity of your work and the dynamic affect it has. Emotion just dripped off of this canvas. Sinfully sweet. What was your inspiration for this piece? Loved it!

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...is me and my life...this is how I feel right now at this point in my life...The version I posted on my 360 blog said Burden of thorns instead of crown, which one do you like better??? I couldn't decide...Thank you for always being so supportive



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Hey Poetry...,

I think I would go with Burden as it is alittle more closely related to the effect, and emotion you felt and are depicting. Let me tell ya, you are one talented lady...awesome!

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