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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 06-21-2008, 06:26 PM
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I wrote this for a friend who felt used by an X...


If I used you and left you to die
Would that stop this cry
This outburst of hell
Doesn't sound like you must be a spell
Or some kind of sickness
To think yourself as useless
I can think of many ways
Yet none are abusive
What about as the gatherer of nectar from my flowers
What about the breeze that gives birds ease
What about a smile that can be seen for miles
What about an ARK as these are easy
What about myself and ears
I can listen but not to this admission
Of useless uses
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Of useless uses "


those are my favorite lines, its refreshing to hear a topic not usually written about. nice write.



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