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Old 10-20-2006, 04:33 AM
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Vanishing whispers.
Sometimes at the dying of the day,
I sit and watch the last
written lines
of evening,
when purple ink
runs down
a page of shadows,
and I regret
not having written
it myself.


Sometimes at the parting of the way,
I stand and watch the last
regretful glimpse
of yesterday,
when dry brown leaves
blow through
my autumnal heart,
and I regret
not having acted
in a different play.


Sometimes in the meadow where we lay,
I heard the final echoes
of your goodbye
fading away,
vanishing whispers
held me
one last time,
and I regret
that there was nothing
I could say...
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Hey BACKSTREETDREAMER - I like this poem very much! The flow is right on time. The meaning and poignant to the point of almost-tears. Yeah I'm sure many can relate to the last "goodbye"

This poem brought back memories that I'd rather just let lie... Such is the strength of your words:

one last time,
and I regret
that there was nothing
I could say...

Very nice piece of writing - but then I could just read the 1st stanza again and smile at the beauty of it. Sometimes I think it's a curse to be able to see the sunset as you've described. I'm sure a lot of painters (even poets lol) would like to paint such mystical beauty as the silver-lined, the purple cloud and the crimson gleam of his eye...

At anyrate - nice piece - Thanx for sharing it with us and Welcome again to the JPiC Community

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