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Old 09-19-2007, 06:44 AM
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The Velvet Glove
She sits astride my body moist and hot
her eyes aglow with only she knows what
upon my neck marks made by her with love
on her hand she wore this velvet glove

The room is stifling hot with no fresh air
sweat and tears have wet her long blond hair
her burning eyes look at me from above
on her hand she wore this velvet glove

She lightly moves upon me lips apart
the only sound I hear is from my heart
her touch a feather from a snow white dove
on her hand she wore this velvet glove

She shudders once and gives a tiny cry
smiles down at me and heaves a sleepy sigh
lies down beside me eyes aglow with love
on her hand she wore this velvet glove.



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Old 09-19-2007, 09:14 AM
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Lovely poem with a nice sense of story.
I like how you repeated the lines.
Nice style and form and it was structured good.
A great read, much enjoyed Jim, thanks!



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Old 09-19-2007, 10:46 AM
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NICE, didn't thought even a glove could be a topic.



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Old 09-19-2007, 12:54 PM
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hi moonchild ... thank you very much for you lovely words ...

the inspiration for velvet glove came partly from the erotic electricity that emanates from the ladies of this forum ...

luv ya!



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Old 09-19-2007, 01:02 PM
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many thanx kyanta dude ...



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Jims Inn...very, very softly erotic piece here...and the velvet glove adds a nice mysterious touch to the imagery...makes us wonder who she was, and WHY the velvet glove? ...and where was her whip?!! LOL!

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hi nomad and thanx so much ...

damn! i knew there was something i forgot ... it was the whip and it would have fitted perfectly in that gloved hand ...

actually during the victorian era "a velvet glove" was a euphemism for something very very erotic ...

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