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Old 09-12-2008, 07:18 PM
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a villans story

born to be the villan of the story of my life
a heartless creature that lurks within the shadows
a soul fractured beyond repair
humanity has abandonded mee long ago
a forsaken shadow is all that remains
as i begin to sink in the pond of sorrow
i let go of all there is and to tell the truth i do not care
life has been just anightmare ....or was i the nightmare ?
nomatter the truth remains
moments seperate me from the end
all i can bear to see is the darkest attrocitys i have made
memorys start to fade and as i look intoo them i see the faces
the faces of those i once knew
among the faces hers came forth
her smil, her grin, i could not let go
not yet
i woke up in bed
on the verge of death
she was the reson i am still alive
but nomatter what i am not good enough




by the way its real cuse i have biabetese and tht day i woke up with low blood sugar 45 i almost died.........
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interesting penning S.O.A. one thing you have to use spell check and grammer. Maybe find an editor to help you. There's alot of words written together and misspelled other then that a good write
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