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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 08-11-2008, 03:31 PM
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She is a vision of beauty
Clothed in a light cotton dress
Standing in the radiant sunlight
Her eyes have a brilliant sparkle in them
Her smile embraces me as I gaze at her
Her golden blonde hair flowing
In the breeze like the Nebraska wheat fields
She is enveloped in the fragrance of wild-flowers
She is my vision of beauty
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Hello Bear!

Well, you've certainly given us quite an image with this poem that was very romantic and sweet to read through. I also like how you not just cover sight with what she looks like but also smell as well with her scent being like wildflowers. Anywho, this is another sweet and romantic read of yours that I enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing away!



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Hello Bear!!
Your poem is sooo lovely, sweetheart. I just love the way you describe the beauty of your love.
You express your wonderful inner feelings so well with your precious heart.
Thank you for sharing your outstanding gem with us, Bear!! You are an amazing friend, Tom.
God bless you in all you do!!
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Thank you so much Sarah and Starry for your great comment and for the read I am very happy that you both enjoy reading my romantic poems. It is my pleasure sharing my writing with all of you
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Beautiful Bear all across the board. I can see her hair glistening in the breeze. Exquisite visuals. No one does them like you do... very visual and memorable. Excellent write hon.

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Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poems it is greatly appreciated. Wish I could make your heart sing for real
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Get the hell out of my mind buddy.

How beautifully you've expressed this vision of perfection, the white cotton dress billowing in the breeze in perfect unison with her golden locks, almost the vision of the holy mother (I'm not religious!)
Not many men out there could resist such a sight. She's mine you got it

seriously mate... nice job!



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Wow! Nice avatar LYCAN
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I must echo the sentiments of everyone TOM - You've really outdone yourself with this piece - such a vision of purity and innocense - I can see how LYCAN would say Holy Mother - I image she too has a sensual side about herself --- Truly speaking though - you've highlighted this Aphrodite in the most wonderful shade of beautiful, a vivid and emotional description exquisite - so vivid, one can almost see her - lingering a golden shadow in her wake as she proceeds through the field picking daisies to be sewn into a crown for her hair.

Simply beautiful TOM - Thoroughly enjoyable.
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