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You took the words "I love you" and made them unique.
Well said and written. Wonderful message and good use of words.
This is good. I like it!



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thank-you moon child...



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Wow... this is an exquisite poem and I am giving it an excellent rating. I however disagree.... it is not the particular word one uses to say "I Love You" ...... more in than the fact of the way one says it, vocal inflections .. the expression on the face.. in the eyes. The way it is used. Because really if you think about it..... every written word is a cliché if it is used by someone. I mean how many ways can one say "I Love You" before someone claims cliché?

Anyways I did not find that the case here in your poem. This is simply Exquisite and definitely going in my favorites.

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awww thanx mysty...I was a bit depressed when i wrote it....your appreciation does make me feel better



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