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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.
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Old 08-12-2007, 03:28 AM
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When wishes come true
This wish I’d grant you
If it were mine to give,
Along with the choice of freedom
In my heart to dwell, to live.

Together we would stand
In love we may fall
It should be true
If nothing at all.

If it is right,
If it is craved just enough
Your prince would rescue you
And brave the alligators’ trough.

I’d help you onto my stallion
As I hold the reins steady.
Then into the sunset we’d both ride
As soon as you were ready.



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Old 08-12-2007, 03:46 AM
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WAHHH!
I say bravo!
*huggles*
Yes...i can see how it is a reply to my poem... :]
I love it....lucky woman who finally figures out how amazing you are :]
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Together we would stand
In love we may fall
It should be true
If nothing at all.

Great!



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Old 08-12-2007, 02:00 PM
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Ah! A Knight in Shinning Armour Poem! Great job! My Fav:

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If it is right,
If it is craved just enough
Your prince would rescue you
And brave the alligators’ trough.
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Old 08-13-2007, 08:44 AM
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A great poem!! I love the first 2 stanza, my fav lines are:

Together we would stand
In love we may fall

Your prince would rescue you
And brave the alligators’ trough.

Nice write!! Excellent !!



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