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Old 10-29-2007, 01:22 PM
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When wishes come true
This wish I’d grant you
If it were mine to give,
Along with the choice of freedom
In my heart to dwell, to live.

Together we would stand
In love we may fall
It should be true
If nothing at all.

If it is right,
If it is craved just enough
Your prince would rescue you
And brave the alligators’ trough.

I’d help you onto my stallion
As I hold the reins steady.
Then into the sunset we’d both ride
As soon as you were ready.
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Aw,
This is so cute. I love fairy tales. I've been waiting for Prince charming a very long time. I think my Prince got ate by wolves or at least chased off, but In the forest of my soul, I will always return in dreams, like Sleeping Beauty, where I first believed he would rescue me one day. But if it came true, and he kissed me wake there would be little significance because then it wouldn't be a dream anymore. I prefer Never Never Land.
Although , - LOL I wouldn't chase him off.



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this is really nice. it's like a good bard song. very short and sweet with a nice touch. nicely done.

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JolieH thanks for reading Really appreciate it. and jolie, I so do prefer never never land; you still have to grow up in fairy tales, but never neverland you stay eternally young ha ha.

And Zaac was reading your "I Do Remember Well"...man that is awesome~did i tell you that b 4?



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Nick...glad to see you back in action!! Sorry I missed you this morning...

This IS a very gently bred piece, full of stars and dreams of pure love...and I am loving it! Very, very nice!!

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How lovely...... if only such fairytales were real. This is very soft and delightful. Thank You for a good read.

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