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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 08-07-2008, 05:44 PM
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Whisper of Shadows
Whisper of Shadows
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Whisper of shadows concealed
Waiting for an intimate sigh
Lingering for a zephyr to lift her
~
And to twist, swirl and spin her
Combined with movement
Hesitating near me
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Knowing I’m not
Ignorant of its tricks
The alluring grey mist
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The softness of her shadow
Breathing, exhaling, excitement
Left me enervated
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Awakened by the slightest breath
The enchanted whisper of shadows
She is waiting for my familiar sigh
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Ooh how lovely Bear... I think though you have one too many a's
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The softness of a her shadow
.. other than that this is a lovely breath of fresh air... two lovers enjoying the shadows at night. Umm what a lovely thought. Well I am off to bed now.. perchance to dream of sweeter times.


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Yep - this is lovely TOM - the flow is just so intimate and knowing - it's nice that you pay homage to the concept of equal loving... Finally it seems that one is met on her own terms and respected for being the beautifully intelligent creature that she is:

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Knowing I’m not
Ignorant of its tricks
The alluring grey mist

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She is waiting for my familiar sigh
This was written with respect at the fore, so delicate and beautiful and cunning - I think I sighed with the last line, feeling the utter beauty of it; Pleasure has an interesting way of making itself known.

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Thank you so much Mysty for your comment and for noticing that I had forgot to remove that "a" thought I had removed it and when I reread the poem just missed it I appreciate the help you gave me Thank you so much.
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Jacquii thank you so much for your wonderful and beautiful comment I tried to show the respect I have for someone who I love very much and the respect that she deserves as a woman thank you again
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