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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 01-04-2008, 12:11 AM
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I caress her heart and envision her dreams
Whispering in her ear softly
Sharing with her all that I am.
My warm soul she penetrates
She’s embraced by my heart
Gentle is her dream
My mind she’s employed
What she sees
is hers,
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wonderfully shaped :]

beautiful words :]

i love how it comes smaller and smaller...

thanks for it!

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Old 01-04-2008, 05:00 AM
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Thank you so much my sweet little one I am so happy that you enjoy reading my love and romance poems Mango. you are so cute my sweetest little one
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Poignant ending - The "Me" is like a resounding declaration of sorts. What form is this? It looks like a syllabic shape-type form. Not necessarily a romantic type poem - but the sensuality within is very nice. I think your poem is more on the "love" tip than romanticism - It's quite nice though. I like it - It makes for a lovely read.

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Thank you Jacquii for your great comment
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Beautiful Bear,

You have such sweet words to share.



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Old 01-16-2008, 05:57 PM
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Thank you so much my sweet Jolie
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Bear, this is a very heart-warming piece - almost like a homage paid to the love of your life...very nice!

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