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Old 04-19-2008, 11:07 PM
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Whispers of Love
Whispers of Love

In the isolated darkness of her bed
His husky whisper echoes in her soul
Filling her with an intense desire
For his fervent delicate touch.

His whisper tells of a long sultry night
Filled with sweltering fiery passion
Lovers becoming one in soul
Achieving heights beyond the cosmos

Lovers entwined in needs, wants, hopes and dreams
My hot hard body atop her
Her body opening to mine
Deep within her hot wetness.

Fires surges though our veins
Grunting and moaning endlessly
Collapsing into each other's arms
Holding each other's trembling bodies.

Drifting into a exquisite sated slumber as one
Waking in the magnificent morning light
And softly kissing in the quiet
Gentle breeze of the dawning day.
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Omg Bear and all I have is a turtle...lol....wonderful poem Bear. Sweet, sultry, sensual, and just enough spice! Love it!

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Thank you so much Painted you are great love ya sweetie
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Is it getting hot in here or is it just me? The more I read, the more I wanted to read! Fantastic! It's everything Kim says it is and more! Honey, if I weren't happily married, I'd be moving to your state, lol.

Talk about sweet nothings! Ok, gotta cool down here, lol.

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Collapsing in to each other's arms
Holding each other's trembling bodies.
I love to read your work, it's always fantastic!
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Thank you so very much for your fantastic comment and for your suggestions I have fixed those points you pointed out thank you
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