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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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White flag

Forgotten, an empty shell,
there's nothing left of me.
Look at me, and you can tell,
that there's nothing more to see.

I was consumed by the pain,
no one there by my side.
Left alone in the rain,
pulling down my pride.

Betrayed by fate,
I am now a lost soul.
All that's left in me is hate,
and my life has really no goal.

It seems to me,
that no one cared.
My life is a fading memory,
that no one with me shared.

Love turned to denial,
sparetime to loneliness.
Is this all just a trial,
from our almighty God, our Highness?

If so, I've lost,
He can take back what He gave me.
The white flag I've now tossed,
I no longer want to be.
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