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Old 10-24-2006, 07:10 PM
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Why should I even try, when I know it can only fail?
I can't; it's not a choice I've made, rather something decided for me.
Never did I choose to love you, instead I was tricked, tripped into falling over you, though you caught me before I hit the ground.
What a terrible, horrible thing to do!
Filling me with hope, so when you left I would crash harder than could be imagined.
How cruel.

Moving on isn't a choice to be made, but a twist in fate I've no control over.

Seeing other people isn't even under consideration.
It wouldn't be right; When I see you and my heart flutters, and although I try to keep you out, you're all that occupys my head.
I want to be able to love fully; not just pretend to love whilst I brood over not seeing you.
It wouldn't be fair, to them or me{maybe even you?}

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I liked this poem, it seems to have a theme thats real talking about your heart is good and you do it very easily a gift
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Mmm I've been there - until I finally stopped trying to lie to myself and admitted that I couldn't see other people even if I had wanted to... which of course I didn't. Hehe.
But this piece is great! I love the way you've arranged this piece. My favourite line:

How cruel.

And the question at the end...

{maybe even you?}

Very inspired, very catchy - it sticks with you as a reader, and it adds a little something (a twist maybe) that just wraps everything up nicely. Great write

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