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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 07-28-2008, 06:33 PM
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Wild Orchid
Wild Orchid
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She lives as a wild ivory orchid,
Sensual, majestic and exotic
In paradise with its brilliant sunsets
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The brilliant shafts of the tangerine sun
Casts shades of maroon, pink, and gold
That intensifies her delicate white flesh
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She poses with the horizon to her back
The brilliant colors enhances her soft faint smile
And her radiant sable eyes with gold specks
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I painted her delicate sensual beauty
In a garden of wild orchids
In an array of magnificent colors
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To preserve our love
In the radiant tangerine sunset
Of our sensational island paradise
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Hello Bear!

I really enjoyed this poem and I think that it's a fav. of mine that I've read of yours. I really like how you compare the woman to an orchid and the colors, plus just the imagery that you have going on with this poem. I like how you start with paradise and end with it for your last line of your first stanza and the last line of your last stanza. I think that this ties together your poem nicely.

Anywho, thanks for sharing and keep on writing away!



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Thank you so very much Sarah for your wonderful comment and for taking time to read my writings. it is greatly appreciated
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