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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.
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Old 02-09-2007, 09:29 AM
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Within My Dreams

Many years have passed, since death's chariot, came and took you away
Sometimes, it is all I can do, just to rise to another day
My love for you, just as deep now, as it was when you went away
My love, still so strong, will never sway

I look forward to sleep, because in my dreams you are always there
Walking the path of life, hand in hand
Sailing through ups and downs, without a care
Any thing is possible, in the realm of dreams and it's lair.

In this land of possibilities, I can walk with you, and talk with you
Together facing life's obstacles and dilemmas, and ups and downs
In my dreams, you by my side, I am happy and care free, I am never sad and blue
Oh! In my dreams, I never frown.

But this is not reality, and your death, I should except
But, in my dreams, this is my refuge
With you in this strange land, I have never wept
The reality of pain subsides, you are in my sight, within my view.

But reality I must except, no matter how much it hurts
What is that saying? Life goes on?
But my dreams are my escape, to feel happy, and not feel this hurt
I must continue the path on my own, but in my dreams, I am never alone!
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Very nicely witten..
a little sad.

Still.... you said:

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But reality I must except, no matter how much it hurts
What is that saying? Life goes on?
But my dreams are my escape, to feel happy, and not feel this hurt
I must continue the path on my own, but in my dreams, I am never alone!
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A very powerful and inspiring write. If one reads your bio, then one would know what you have overcome, and still endure to this day is phenomenal, to say the least. I am humbled. Hope all is well.

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Beautiful tribute to love and loss.
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