PoetryInMotion

Jims Inn

hi arthur ...

can't say i'm a fan of this sort of "shaped" formatting of a poem dude... to me the time spent getting the work to look like what you're writing about would be better spent writing another poem ...

that aside i think the actual piece has great merit ... i luv the ladies even though i'll never fully understand them and i think you have written a fine poem which is true to life and well thought out ...

jim

KingAce

I actually had to pause my music and look this over again after the first time I read it. My thoughts towards this poem are that immediately that this is one of those things that a man can find beautiful but can't really grasp the full understanding from being a man. The first thing I thought of to compare it with is a woman's intuition that is spoken of so much or the connection a mother has with her children. It's something a man can watch but cannot touch when it comes to experience and any real man would know to respect those things and if you need it he would give you space...thanks for the read;