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Old 09-30-2006, 01:40 AM
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You Come Unto Me
Of brazen sands
ebony winds
you come unto me
like the sweet sap
of a maple.

You taste of myrrh
you smell
of fiery cinnamon.

Like thunder
you come unto me.

Of ancient rivers
West African sunsets
like tenacious roots
of the strongest Oak.

Like thunder
you come unto me.

I close my eyes
my tears dance
down my jaw, etching
the salty, yet sweet
taste of you.

Like thunder
you come unto me.

I will hold this dream close
until the day
like the thunder
you will come
unto me.



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Old 09-30-2006, 09:51 AM
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Erotic. And intense.
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment santre_63!! I have been writing more intense topics these days. Glad you enjoyed this. Take Care!!

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Santre_63, I believe we both share in scribing an erotic piece, every now and then!!! Much Luv and Many Hugs......

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I think you and I are on the same wavelength Sanjay!!!



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Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm maple yummmmmmy,

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Of brazen sands
ebony winds
you come unto me
like the sweet sap
of a maple.

You taste of myrrh
you smell
of fiery cinnamon.

Like thunder
you come unto me.
you've got me think.........n of pan cakes among other things
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Kim,

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close my eyes
my tears dance
down my jaw, etching
the salty, yet sweet
taste of you.

Like thunder
you come unto me.

I will hold this dream close
until the day
like the thunder
you will come
unto me.
this is wonderfully
sensual.

Your write is
brilliantly done.

Thanks for the
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Thank you so much Abae and Jeez (Happy Birthday!!!) for taking time to read and comment. I was concerned about the hint of sensuality, and writing tastefully. From the warm comments, I believe, I need not worry anymore. LOL!!! Pancakes sounds awfully good Abae, LOL!!!!! Don't forget your syrup! LOL!! Again, thank you, and take care.

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