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For you are so special
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FOR YOU ARE SO SPECIAL:
Your cheeks make the leaves of a rose feel rough,
and the warmth in your hands make the sunbeam feel cold.
Your lips makes every guy want to kiss you,
and with you in my arms, I wish to forever hold.
For you are so special, in all the ways you can find.
I dream of you, I think about you, you're always on my mind.
Your belly makes me want to lick you,
and your legs I wish to kiss.
Your voice makes music sound like rust,
and your smile is filled with bliss.
For you are so special, in all the ways you can find.
I dream of you, I think about you, you're always on my mind.
For you are so special, in all the ways you can find.
In my heart, forever, you will have your name signed.
Comment please Just wrote it =)
Last edited by Tanax; 04-28-2007 at 10:39 AM.
Reason: Spelling mistake..
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Tanax
FOR YOU ARE SO SPECIAL:
Your cheeks make the leaves of a rose feel rough,
and the warmth in your hands make the sunbeam feel cold.
Your lips makes every guy want to kiss you,
and with you in my arms, I wish to forever hold.
For you are so special, in all the ways you can find.
In my heart, forever, you will have your name signed.
Comment please Just wrote it =)
Dear TANAX,
Great to see you back and writing again! I love to read poems of people in love. This was such a beautiful tribute to the one you love. Oh how exciting to think of this person, who is she that is cherished so by our TANAX. I hope you sing this beautiful song
to her, and she fills up with the love you have expressed. This was simply exquisite TANAX, and thank you for sharing this with us. This is the first poem I read today, and you set my mood meter to LOVE!
TAN!!! I can see your head turning into a heart shape right now and blushing What can i say, your level goes upwards 3 levels with every poem you write, but this one jumped up 11!! I've always loved the way you write, and as the others already said, it made me think about her. I'm so happy for you to see you being so happy and in love, for i had been there to talk with you about your bad times for so long, i was starting to get really worried. You saved me from total madness Thank you for that, and all the happiness for you two
Great poem, it does get us people thinking about her <: )
Thank you mate!
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Originally Posted by PaintedDiary
Dear TANAX,
Great to see you back and writing again! I love to read poems of people in love. This was such a beautiful tribute to the one you love. Oh how exciting to think of this person, who is she that is cherished so by our TANAX. I hope you sing this beautiful song
to her, and she fills up with the love you have expressed. This was simply exquisite TANAX, and thank you for sharing this with us. This is the first poem I read today, and you set my mood meter to LOVE!
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Thank you for your kind comment
Her name is Linn, we met via her brother, whom I met via an internet rolegame 6 years ago. Some day, he mentioned his sister, that were really depressed, and he was afraid that she would do something to harm herself, and since I also were really depressed back then, he thought it was a good idea so that me and Linn could comfort eachother.
Then now.. 2007, around february, when we had 1 week off from school, my family went skiing, so I was without internet for 1 week(she lives 60 miles away from where I live), so we couldn't talk for a week, and that's when I realized that I can't live without her, so we started to send SMS. And when I came back from the skiing, I were so in love with her and my love has only growed since then.
TAN!!! I can see your head turning into a heart shape right now and blushing What can i say, your level goes upwards 3 levels with every poem you write, but this one jumped up 11!! I've always loved the way you write, and as the others already said, it made me think about her. I'm so happy for you to see you being so happy and in love, for i had been there to talk with you about your bad times for so long, i was starting to get really worried. You saved me from total madness Thank you for that, and all the happiness for you two
Awww, thank you sweetie I'm so greatful that you have been here for me when I felt bad, you truly are an angel!
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Just wrote it =)
I'm glad you find the poem to your likings =)
I love to read poems of people in love. This was such a beautiful tribute to the one you love. Oh how exciting to think of this person, who is she that is cherished so by our TANAX. I hope you sing this beautiful song
What can i say, your level goes upwards 3 levels with every poem you write, but this one jumped up 11!! I've always loved the way you write, and as the others already said, it made me think about her. I'm so happy for you to see you being so happy and in love, for i had been there to talk with you about your bad times for so long, i was starting to get really worried. You saved me from total madness 
