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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.
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Old 04-19-2008, 10:06 PM
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I believe faith bought us here,
In each other's arms
And faith already had a notion
That we are different.
I feel our love is a river
Not expecting the high tides,
Or when the weather will change.
Or when the water calms down.
We push each other away,
But still feel needed by the other.
Feeling coldness in our bodies,
and willing to feel the heat with a touch.
Both of us feeing drained,
Thinking where do we go from here.
But I look through your watery eyes.
As you wrapped your arms around me,
and kiss your forehead.
I feel the warmth from your face.
I know it's woth the effort,
That I'll be forever,
By your side.



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Old 04-23-2008, 09:33 AM
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Very relateable and insightful.
I know how this feels.
Very expressive and well thought out.
Beautiful stuff!



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But I look through your watery eyes,
As you wrap your arms around me,
and kiss your forehead.
I feel the warmth from your face.
I know it's worth the effort,
That I'll be forever,
By your side.
I read this poem and loved it! The image in the last stanza was so vivid I had to quote it. ...I look through your watery eyes... what a way to describe tear filled eyes! I am impressed and looking forward to reading more of your work! I hope you don't mind...I've bolded suggestions for you.

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