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Your voice
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Biography: IM JONATHAN , IM A 23 YEAR OLD INDIAN MALE , BY PROFESSION IM A TELEMARKETER .
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Your voice
For a stranger I spoke to on the phone ... inspiration comes from weird places
Faceless stranger
leaving behind nothing
except the lingering melody of your voice .
Soft , soothing and subtle
yet as distinct
as the song of the wind
that beckons the leaves to sing along to its monsoon love songs .
Faceless stranger
leaving behind nothing
except the lingering melody of your voice .
Soft , soothing and subtle
yet as distinct
as the cooing of the nightbirds ,
natures serenades to secret lovers
on their stolen night time rendezvous .
Faceless stranger
leaving behind nothing.....
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Biography: IM JONATHAN , IM A 23 YEAR OLD INDIAN MALE , BY PROFESSION IM A TELEMARKETER .
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great way to come back to jpic ..5 star rating from a brother and a dear freind ... glad yu liked this one ... came after a long time of poetic drought ...Chester
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Jon, this is itself a soothing piece, and a very reflective piece as well, and it lures us into that state because of the "lingering melody" and "soft, soothing, subtle" descriptions that you present to us...very peaceful piece to come back with. Great to read you again, Jon!!
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Hey Jonathan I take it you are a customer service rep that works at a call center too?
Me too ...... although I am the one told that my voice is as you describe. Too many tell me I have a sexy phone voice. I perhaps should have gone into the phone sex trade.......my god just think of the bucks I would be rolling in. lol and yes the dual meaning was intended
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Originally Posted by BekiLynn
I like your style, repetition usually doesn't work so well but yours flows very nicely.
First and foremost ... love yu're name Bekilynn ...sounds straight out of a Jane Austin novel ...Glad yu like my style ...Yep repetition , thats not something I do relly often but Im glad it works here ... I didnt want this poem to be mind blowing ..I wanted it soft and subtle ..like the lady on the phone ..Im glad I managed to do that ..Thank yu Beki ..Chester
Biography: IM JONATHAN , IM A 23 YEAR OLD INDIAN MALE , BY PROFESSION IM A TELEMARKETER .
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Originally Posted by Mysty
Hey Jonathan I take it you are a customer service rep that works at a call center too?
Me too ...... although I am the one told that my voice is as you describe. Too many tell me I have a sexy phone voice. I perhaps should have gone into the phone sex trade.......my god just think of the bucks I would be rolling in. lol and yes the dual meaning was intended
Beautiful poem hon I really enjoyed this
Mysty
Hey Mysty ..yu got me wondering if I could maybe call yu n listen in to ure sexy phone voice ... LOL ..glad yu liked the poem ..Chester
