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Emotional Romantic In love or have poetry that tugs at ones heartstrings? Please share your romantic tear-jerkers & emotionally draining pieces right here in this forum.

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Old 10-03-2006, 09:57 AM
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I wrote this for my fella, without him helping me and talking me through these last 2 months, I'm pretty sure I wouldn't have seen christmas this year.
Ty 4 helping me fight "the demons" and giving me the strengh to be me again

I feel your kisses
Lips soft against my own
Sometimes soft and tender
Others passionate..full on

I feel your arms around me
Keeping me safe and warm
Taking me back to childhood
Protecting me from harm

I feel your naked body
Pressed against my skin
Powerful, forceful, gentle bliss
Forgive me for I have sinned

But then i hear the words you speak
Trickling smoothly through my ears
They make my heart cry out for you
They take away my fears

They tell me that you'll always be
My man, my rock, my soul
Your words are like a thief at night
It was my heart they stole

I don't have your words to speak
Although my heart is true
I find it hard to express how much
I really do love you



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Dear SEBBY,

This was sweet, heartfelt, and quite lovely. Sounds like someone's in LOVE!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!! I am soooo happy for you. Your fella, I read really cares for you, and you care for him.... mutual respect is a beautiful thing. That is so comforting to have...respect and trust, as well as your heart pounding!!! LOL!!!! From what I know of you from reading, you are one SPECIAL lady (and a dear and special friend to me), so this fella must be special as well, to compliment you! How is Collin (spelling)? I can feel the connection between you two, radiate outward from this piece SEBBY. I feell good, and am smiling away! You deserve the best, and I wish many more blessings that are in store for you! Luv Ya'

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They tell me that you'll always be
My man, my rock, my soul
Your words are like a thief at night
It was my heart they stole
Hey MS VS - Yep - sounds like someone is definitely in L-O-V-E -----> This poem is really quite beautiful - The quoted stanza above was just beautifully written... Yeah - I know this emotion oh-so well AND can really relate to the entire poem, as love is something that just cannot be denied!

I'm really glad you've found someone who will cherish you and make you shine. I'm also really glad you've shared this poem with us, as many of us are prolly quite jealous of you right now LOL - finding that soulmate is still a beautiful thing - seems thievery (sp?) is quite appropriate in this circumstance LOL.

Anyway enough blablabla from me - But I truly enjoyed this poem SEBBY - Thanx for the sharing

Jacquii.

btw - We've been missing you on JPiC lately
AND Looniez is looking quite lovely! TTYL



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Ty both, was worried I'd be banned 4 making u all puke lol
callum (u were close lol) is fine thx kim just started nursey 2 weeks ago.
And yeah I am pretty loved up, jaquii knows the man I wrote about and I think he's perfect..oh god i'm gonna go again, I'll shut up now lol
Anyway ty 4 ur comments they were really nice and as I mentioned at the start of the poem, I've had a bad 2 months but am back now and intend to be a regular annoyance to u poetic peeps

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