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Old 04-14-2008, 09:12 PM
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This one's absolutely brilliant!!! I like it a lot, PD!

Thanks for sharing and congratulations on it being published!

I feel that your poem is a reflection of how we all are... phoenixes (is there such a plural form for this?)!

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This one's absolutely brilliant!!! I like it a lot, PD!

Thanks for sharing and congratulations on it being published!

I feel that your poem is a reflection of how we all are... phoenixes (is there such a plural form for this?)!

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so much for taking time to read and to comment. You are so kind and supportive, and truly a great friend. I'm happy you enjoyed the read and yes, it was indeed meant to be a reflection for all...you have a keen eye! Thank you also for sending the message of well wishes and congrats on my site! You are ever so inspiring and again I am soooooo happy you joined our Community! Take Care.

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I loved reading this. Beautiful and inspiring

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And so you rose like a phoenix beautifully stated and written Painted Diary brilliant
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