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Saxophone Love Series Parts (I, II, III, IV, V, VI, VII, VIII, IX and X)
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Old 08-22-2007, 11:01 AM
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There is a publisher I think interested in this series......wooohooo!

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The avatar playing the sax is to TOTALLY COOL!! Wow! Inspiration is bliss!

Still lovin this stuff...but not so late at night...if you know what I mean! A girl's gotta get some sleep...

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The avatar playing the sax is to TOTALLY COOL!! Wow! Inspiration is bliss!

Still lovin this stuff...but not so late at night...if you know what I mean! A girl's gotta get some sleep...

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Thanks Ms Nomad...Ms Jacquii posted that fantabulous "Sax Girl"!!! lololol, I know what you mean about the sleep, lololol.

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Evenin' PD;

If your writes (African Drum Series and Sax Series) had been to music ... they would have been enough... had they been to passion, they would have been enough. Had they been to mystique, eros, or ... to your lover, they would have been enough. But to rise above each, but yet combine them all and present them in base carnality that defies judgement or ridicule is an amazing accomplishment. I somehow get the feeling that as you start each addition... it is written very quickly... that you are taken with the verse, not pulling it forth. These series are from within... where it counts. You should be very proud. Thank you for sharing.

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Not that we would ever forget...but thanks for bringing this one back up on the list...whew PD...I'm glad you moved on into the world of horror...LOL!

feralpen...you nailed it on the head...er...well you know what I mean...I enjoy reading all the comments about PD's fabulous series almost as well as the poetry!!

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Evenin' PD;

If your writes (African Drum Series and Sax Series) had been to music ... they would have been enough... had they been to passion, they would have been enough. Had they been to mystique, eros, or ... to your lover, they would have been enough. But to rise above each, but yet combine them all and present them in base carnality that defies judgement or ridicule is an amazing accomplishment. I somehow get the feeling that as you start each addition... it is written very quickly... that you are taken with the verse, not pulling it forth. These series are from within... where it counts. You should be very proud. Thank you for sharing.

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Dear fp,

Thank you so much for taking precious time to read and comment on my Sax and African Drum Love Series....I am honored. Your comment made me misty and I cannot thank you enough. I took a break from writing these instrument poems and am starting to feel the muse again to continue. I look forward to reading your work fp because I know it will be a real treat. Much respect...

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Not that we would ever forget...but thanks for bringing this one back up on the list...whew PD...I'm glad you moved on into the world of horror...LOL!

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Dear Ms Nomad,

Thank you soooo much for your continued support Ms Nomad. I am honored you read my series and I am fixin' to start up again....with unusual instruments...lol..Yes, I do love the horror and working on 4 or 5 stories! I will keep you posted....Love ya!

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