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Saxophone Love Series Parts (I, II, III, IV, V, VI, VII, VIII, IX and X)
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Old 02-25-2007, 06:35 PM
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Saxophone Love Series Parts (V, VI, VII, VIII, IX and X)


I plan to finish the Series, and do paintings to compliment the poems in Sepia Ink, and a light wash, for that beautiful, antique, and rustic feel, and in oils, and oil pastels, and a few scultures . In mind at the moment, is to try to capture on canvas the "Soul" , or "Spirit", of the Saxophone, if you will. I plan to post Saxophone Love I through IV shortly. Enjoy!

Saxophone Love V

His mouth fills up with thoughts of me
reminiscing as if my thighs were joined with jazz
till he belts an oh so long
smooth sound from his saxophone.

He blows down the ride of my breasts
up the arch of my spine
into the crest of my thighs.

When the song is over
he licks his lips oh so sweetly
to get a second wind...
to play me again.


Copyright © 2006 Kimberly D. Robinson



Saxophone Love VI

His rhythm, reminiscent
of a Jamaican jazz serenade
paralyzes me.

I cannot resist his melody
No! I don't want to stop.

He pushes his brass horn in my ___ face
releasing sweet sensual notes
at a time.

I can't help being captivated
till I scream, till I chime.

This cannot be the last song
I wanted him to play another melody…

…harder
.… faster
….stronger.

I want to feast on his brass
all night long
till I'm covered ___with his Jazz
yeah.


Copyright © 2006 Kimberly D. Robinson



Saxophone Love VII

Moistened my lips to reciprocate his melody
took his brass horn in my hands
and began to____ blow ____ gently
till he no longer could resist my invitation to
compose a duet ___ privately.

We waxed and waned like the painted moon,
we ebbed and flowed with exquisite
harmony like the tides of the Nile
till his precious jazz replenished my bayou
one note at a time.


Copyright © 2006 Kimberly D. Robinson



Saxophone Love VIII

Opened my window
sounds of the night float in
a misty cool zephyr
arousing my peanut butter skin.

A silhouette
my beautiful Moroccan man
divinely reclining,
fingers gently caressing his
ebony brass sax.

Mouth moistens delicate tones
blowing sweet air with tremble
stroke every note of me.

I cannot resist.

I want more.

I taste every C-clef; the tenor
aged like my collection of fine wine
fermented from sweet Pinar del Rio vines,
pulls me up slowly
improvising jazz between my thighs.

Afterward, a misty cool zephyr
tickles my dampened peanut butter skin
as we lay in each other’s arms
listening to the sounds
of the night float in.


Copyright © 2006 Kimberly D. Robinson

Saxophone Love IX - Cinquain

Sweet wind
exhales from brass
notes dance la reverie
flesh pulsating, as I murmur
his name.

Copyright © 2006 Kimberly D. Robinson



Saxophone Love X

Dress poured over my curves
ebbs and flows with la musica
my eyes closed
my skin, moist
my hips
meandering freely

Suddenly, I hear echoes
clock strikes midnight
room now filled
with a tenor soliloquy
prearranged for two
amber wind fades
into silence

Shadows
of this midnight rendezvous
reveal a smooth, shiny,
erect, and ready…
saxophone

Touching me there
on my slightly wet__lips
I accept the invitation
as I slumber deep

Mouthpiece
to my glossed lips
I blow softly
tasting him

He plays one more
libidinous time
note after note
indeed we entwine
to a rhythmic
symphony sublime

Oh…how I love the Saxophone

Copyright © 2006 Kimberly D. Robinson

WOW beautiful sensual and trult erotic I love it its soft gentle and passionate excellent penning
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Hi painted diarys

This truly a magnificent write It's so sensual, erotic and passionate, the image I recieved was marvalous. very very hottttt!!!
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This truly a magnificent write It's so sensual, erotic and passionate, the image I recieved was marvalous. very very hottttt!!!
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Wooohooooo!!! That's what I love to hear!!!! LOLOL Thank you again!! Good to see you to!!!!

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Saxophone Love VI

I want to feast on his brass
all night long
till I'm covered ___with his Jazz
yeah.


Saxophone Love IX - Cinquain

Sweet wind
exhales from brass
notes dance la reverie
flesh pulsating, as I murmur
his name.

Saxophone Love X


Shadows
of this midnight rendezvous
reveal a smooth, shiny,
erect, and ready…
saxophone
- MS KIM - this is SOME sensual set of writing - That's all I can say right now = Bravo! for an intricately woven series of poesy - I look forward to seeing the matching artworks for this!

AWESOME!

Thanx for sharing it and Congrats on a lovely compilation

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AWESOME!

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Dear Ms Jacquii,

To get approval on a Final Edit!!!!! Thank you for everything with these poems, and waking up my muse once more. I am currently working on the ending poems, and the art work t compliment this series. You have no idea, what this process, you, and this site means to me! I will be publishing this series, along with the "My Piano" series, with art work as well. These are to comprise my art / poetry show next year hopefully. Love Ya'!!!

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