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The more I kill
the more popular I become
the more bureaucracy sells
I’m powerful
swallowing weak souls
one by one

I’m in your schools
on your streets
in your prisons
was at your family reunion

I’m in elite neighborhoods
up to no good
I go well with ganja and gin
even CEO’s are Lucifer’s kingpin

A devil’s delight
glass ignites
inhaling a miasma
dressed in white

Intensely you suck me
I come instantly
I fill your mouth with ecstasy
see the way you look at me?

I’m not pricey
twenty dollars will do
I promise to take you there
to the moment you first blew

Keep you chasin’ that primordial euphoria
the addictive sentence of vaporous cooked coca
I get them young
make them steal from their Bwana

For whom the bell tolls
I warn you to get help___soon
I’m powerful
and my ultimate goal
to see a coffin
fit for your statue.



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