07-25-2006, 02:40 PM
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Re: Music Box
This so reminds me of Music Box Dancer by Frank Mills, the musical song. I had a cinderella music box and it turned into a pumpkin in an Amish field. Your lines are strong and the metaphor is spot on!
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Lesbian sexual energy is very powerful. If you don't make it into something bigger than yourself, it is wasted energy. I chose writing...
Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
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