Kim,
Your ability to use the poets pallet and brush is exceptional.
You set the visual stage
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What happened to the music box
two figures spinning in love
weathered strings
play a dying melody
for you were
the best part of me
you open the curtain
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The music box
only opens half way
the other half
closes more and more
each day
and tell your story
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I will hope for tomorrow
but for now
the figures kiss (Good Bye)
but never kiss (Hello)
The first five lines are my favorites!
Jerry
