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Old 07-10-2007, 04:58 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Default Re: Spark Your Creativity #14 (Famous Poet Freestyle Challenge)
The Following Text Is Quoted:
Originally Posted by Kit Carson View Post
But alas, upon a bright sunrise

It is true that

“Nothing gold can stay”

“The answer is blowing in the wind”

“For the Snark was a Boojum, you see”
Hmmmm - The old english feel does give this poem a little "umph" - but I really liked the quoted lines in the last stanza - Seems you've quoted Carroll = For the Snark was a Boojum, you see" --- I thought I'd recognized that line - not exactly sure which poem it's from - but yeah.... The poem has a light bouncy feel/rhythm - which is quite amazing considering the Old English wording. Very nice poem!

Great answer to MS KIM's challenge - Thanx for the sharing

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“I do use powerful words to evoke emotion, but also to stimulate imagination. If one can 'see' the words dance before
his eyes - then he can likely feel, smell and even taste them as well. And I do thoroughly enjoy really tasty poems.
My poetry is an emotions-fest sprinkled with a little garlic salt, Mrs. Dash, fresh ginger and Tabasco sauce...
My poetry is like a piece of General Tso's chicken tossed in ghetto soul.” ---
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