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nomadicrhymer · 09-19-2007, 03:55 PM

This is a really captivating story...but I must be slow today, because I think I missed the twist? I thought he was a ghost but then he said "I want to die"...hmmmm...I will have to read over. It really captures the interest from the title, however, and encourages you to read through, to figure out what was the matter with Eric...but alas, I didn't! Will be back...

Nomad

09-19-2007, 03:55 PM	#2 (permalink)
nomadicrhymer Moderator Name: Therese Gender: Location: Claremont, CA nomadicrhymer's Mood: Last Online: 04-05-2012 11:54 AM	Re: The Unregistered Ghost This is a really captivating story...but I must be slow today, because I think I missed the twist? I thought he was a ghost but then he said "I want to die"...hmmmm...I will have to read over. It really captures the interest from the title, however, and encourages you to read through, to figure out what was the matter with Eric...but alas, I didn't! Will be back... Nomad
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