hmmmm - This is almost a haunting write ERIK - You're words are a catalyst that insights some kinda regret almost. Regret of never loving - because you'll end up holding the shattered pieces of your own heart as those that have punked you from ever knowing love, sit around laughing and making miserable noises....
If that even makes sense LOL ------> I don't know if I can quite agree with the message of your poem, as I of the school of thought "It's better to have loved and lost to never have loved at all..."
Anyway - Do tell of your motivation for penning such a piece...
As always though - the style of your writing is quite beautiful, even though the tone somber.
At anyrate - thanx for sharing
Jacquii.
