[butchiesmom]

I thank you for your input. This is a very,very rough draft, lol. I have no idea where this is going but think it is tied in with my book, Eilia, which is also posted on here. This is a scifi/fantasy story. The husband is just driving the car for her, he will have nothing to do with the rest of the story, I think, but I've found you can not depend on the rest of the story doing what you want because the characters take over and do what they want to do, lol.

If you read Eilia you might get a clue as to where this is going. If you do, please let me know because the characters have taken over and are holding me hostage! They won't give me a clue as to what they're going to do next, lol. (just kidding, I think)

Thanks for your input! I have been working with my copy of the rough draft and have found a few places I will be correcting but until I have some idea what's going on, this is as good as it gets for now, lol.

hugs,
Gail

I transferred your version to my Word and compared your editing to what's on the screen and thought "Wow! That's how it would look?" I do tend to get wordy at first. So much to say... Like I said, any help is always appreciated. I think I've already edited this some on the computer but haven't transferred it here yet. You can bet I will and that I will be using your changes, I think it's helping to clarify some things for me. Thanks! Gail