The bed
where once we slept
no longer holds your shape...
did you think my heart would hold it
longer?
First appeared in
Modern English Tanka - Vol. 2, No. 2 . (covering my copy-righted behind!)
Cinquain are really an amazing form. They force you to think through your ideas and choose your words carefully. I like your saxaphone, Painted Diary! Sartor--"full moon" was beautiful! (And so are everyone else's! I was just a ditz and posted after reading the first page.)
