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Old 03-03-2008, 01:35 PM   #2 (permalink)
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'Were you thinking of me when you were fucking her?
Step on my toes as I dance my way through your guilt.'

Amazing, I love the bluntness you have here, mixed with the delicate imagery. Its really effective. I've read this a few times through now, and I'm still trying to work out whether you're appreciating this attention, my feeling is that you are, correct me if I'm wrong?
Intriguing xx