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Old 09-17-2006, 05:36 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by MsJacquiiC
Silent Onslaught


Yet my own body succumbs to the pressures of such sweet pain
Muscles tense and the hint of a tear dares show my hidden shame,
Though smoothly the wet lets the sigh - that dare never come in - reign.
The beauty of such a terribly horrid, yet haunting taunt
Whilst Mom sleeps under covers of seven thickly huge blankets
My moan is heard. I swear I never want to be raped again.
Ummm, it really hurts inside to read this....I don't know the personal feeling but a few women I really love and care for have told me stories like this and it is horrible; I truly don't know what to say...I mean it is an amazing poem but the topic just...*sigh* I don't know, I wanna say I loved it but it seems weird to enjoy a poem about rape; I'm sorry
"From the ashes to my heart, love burns resiliently as a phoenix..." -Asylum