Poetry in Color Forum - View Single Post - Dali Diary Entry #1, February 17th, 1949-----Chocolate Dreams

JolieH · 04-27-2008, 09:50 PM

So this woman fantasizes about having sexual relationships with another woman, and she's derranged, schizophrenic to some degree. I think you have a good start. Poe comes to mind as I read this. I don’t know what twists you have planned, but you certainly have a lot of options. I know you like to surprise your readers. About the Vampire aspect, if this is a vampire tale, maybe a spot or two of blood on the sheets, her hands, face, or some bedroom object, would be enough to establish some background early on in the story.

04-27-2008, 09:50 PM	#10 (permalink)
JolieH JPiC Contributor Name: Jolie Harsch JolieH's Mood: Last Online: 05-02-2012 12:30 PM	Re: Dali Diary Entry #1, February 17th, 1949-----Chocolate Dreams So this woman fantasizes about having sexual relationships with another woman, and she's derranged, schizophrenic to some degree. I think you have a good start. Poe comes to mind as I read this. I don’t know what twists you have planned, but you certainly have a lot of options. I know you like to surprise your readers. About the Vampire aspect, if this is a vampire tale, maybe a spot or two of blood on the sheets, her hands, face, or some bedroom object, would be enough to establish some background early on in the story.
	Jolie "You gain strength, courage, and confidence by every experience in which you really stop to look fear in the face. You must do the thing which you think you cannot do." (Eleanor Roosevelt)