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JolieH · 04-27-2008, 10:04 PM

There you go, you have the vampire element suggested. The last sentence in the first paragraph sounds a little awkward compared to the rest of the piece. Good luck, and let me know when further parts are posted.

04-27-2008, 10:04 PM	#6 (permalink)
JolieH JPiC Contributor Name: Jolie Harsch JolieH's Mood: Last Online: 05-02-2012 12:30 PM	Re: Dali Diary Entry #2, February 21st, 1949…..Crimson Bath There you go, you have the vampire element suggested. The last sentence in the first paragraph sounds a little awkward compared to the rest of the piece. Good luck, and let me know when further parts are posted.
	Jolie "You gain strength, courage, and confidence by every experience in which you really stop to look fear in the face. You must do the thing which you think you cannot do." (Eleanor Roosevelt)