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Old 05-02-2008, 09:54 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I read this but didn't take the time to comment on this excellent story. I like the twist you added to it in the end. A story about chasing ghosts and finding the ghosts they found were actually a broadcast of themselves trying to find the ghosts, lol. What a wonderful twist! I didn't see it coming! That's why I like reading your work! You take something and add your own twist to it.

Very good, Dave!
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