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Old 09-28-2006, 02:14 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Default Re: Silent Onslaught (CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme)
damn jac, that was a curveball from left field & i enjoyed it/ enjoyed it much. all the read i'm invisioning a totally differnt sufferage. it read somewhat a carnal romance until,

"Whilst Mom sleeps under covers of seven thickly huge blankets
My moan is heard. I swear I never want to be raped again."

that pierces deep mana. cuidado-