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jakeminick · 02-20-2011, 09:30 PM

pleasing to read. immaculate flow. could use a little more "meat" though. maybe a little deeper "truths" found amongst the eloquent description. i would definitely keep reading if this was an opening though. peace.

02-20-2011, 09:30 PM	#3 (permalink)
jakeminick McGonagall's Ghost Age: 29 \| Gender: jakeminick's Mood: Last Online: 04-26-2012 06:31 PM	Re: streetcorner bequest pleasing to read. immaculate flow. could use a little more "meat" though. maybe a little deeper "truths" found amongst the eloquent description. i would definitely keep reading if this was an opening though. peace.