Creative Traditional:

[BekiLynn]

1)

Addiction

I wake at daybreak
desperate with longing;
there's no antidote
for this need to be with you-
your touch is my addiction.


2)

Beacon

Watching the shimmer
of early evening stars
I realize again ~
I am meant for your beacon
in this dark and lonely world.

[Kit Carson]

I meant to ask you for this the other night...you read my mind? Very nice Beki and it doesn't hurt, does it? "Addiction" solid, no pill for that, lol. "Beacon" very interesting. So, two thumbs up for both.

[PaintedDiary]

I love these! They are so beautifully crafted and executed. The message in both speaks volumes in their brevity.

Just

Kim

[mangodroplet]

Very Cool :]
So much in so little words.....

[BekiLynn]

Thank you for reading Kit - and fo ryour comments. And thank you too ladies.

[Bear]

Very beautiful penning Beki I love them they speak from the heart of you
hugs kisses
Bear

[BekiLynn]

THANK YOU BEAR