Air of Eden~

Moonchild · 09-04-2007, 09:43 AM

AIR OF EDEN ~ SONNET

Thanatos drips sweet from lips seduction
of dark Eden. Tongues of lust lick virtue
as two faces of Eve reflection sin.
Out of womb of Lilith we're born anew.

Shadow summons its black upon our soul
sleeping on silver eve of Eden's moon.
The mouth of Mother Lilith hums a lull
as we breathe in the air of Eden's tomb.

She's risen up on dark of aeon's night.
Inhale the ancient breeze of Lilith's air
and let it fill your soul so feather light.
Inside it Eden's beauty is still there.

Breathe inside forgotten air of Eden
as once it was and as it might have been.

© July 16, 2006 Karen Davies

Jims Inn · 09-05-2007, 12:24 AM

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Moonchild

AIR OF EDEN ~ SONNET

Thanatos drips sweet from lips seduction
of dark Eden. Tongues of lust lick virtue
as two faces of Eve reflection sin.
Out of womb of Lilith we're born anew.

Shadow summons its black upon our soul
sleeping on silver eve of Eden's moon.
The mouth of Mother Lilith hums a lull
as we breathe in the air of Eden's tomb.

She's risen up on dark of aeon's night.
Inhale the ancient breeze of Lilith's air
and let it fill your soul so feather light.
Inside it Eden's beauty is still there.

Breathe inside forgotten air of Eden
as once it was and as it might have been.

© July 16, 2006 Karen Davies

hi karen ...

this is so seductive - the feminine dark side ... lust ... love .... and death ...

i think the imagery that is conjured up is so gothic ... not to mention the picture ...

a really beautiful sonnet and even though it's dark ... as you say ...

"Inside it Eden's beauty is still there."

great work ...