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Old 10-14-2007, 07:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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All Hallows Eve
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Beware, long shadows grace the land
Apollo bids adieu,
His dying rays have softly tanned
to brown the daylight view.
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Beware, the twilight thick and hot
Is fading into dark,
bar now your doors and question not
The mewling howl or bark.
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Beware, with darkness comes the shade,
the goblins, ghosts and ghouls.
This night alone for it was made,
this night when evil rules.
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Beware the tortured moon is tossed
upon a cloudy sea,
when mankind out of doors are lost,
no matter where they flee.
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Beware, across the land will flood
the hell-hounds from the pit.
Their drooling jaws will drink the blood
and gorge themselves on it.
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Beware, the knock upon your door
demands you pay the price.
You cower there afraid before,
the knock comes twice, and thrice.
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Beware, you fool beware, beware.
Your fate you now will meet.
From a three foot goblin there,
Shrieking "Twick or Tweet" !
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Sartor
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Old 10-15-2007, 01:01 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Sartor,
After reading this goulish nightmare, I'll be afraid to answer my door for a week. I'll never trust those little trick or treaters again.

All nicely said, I wouldn't expect less from such talent as yours.
Jolie

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Old 10-16-2007, 12:07 PM   #3 (permalink)
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great Sartor this was fun and well written, I missed your writing
 

Old 10-16-2007, 12:51 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Jolie............Yes indeed..........the little goblins will be out in force on the Eve of All Hallow......beware, take care and see ya there!!...........thanks for the note.
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Hey Eric................I am just really busy these days..........have not had a lot of time for posting on the forums...........thanks for the note
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Old 10-16-2007, 08:00 PM   #5 (permalink)
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LOL Sartor this is Splendiforous .... absolutely Magnificent. I can see someone is thinking about Halloween. Don't you just love the little tykes that come to your door all dressed up? Well I love the little ones.... but abhor the older ones.... because the little are still innocent...... the older ones .... well they are tainted... with opinions and attitudes. Things I can do without. Meh anyways hope you have the kind of evening you want on ALL Hallowed Eve.


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