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Old 07-25-2006, 04:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Motivated by
intellectual
curiosity and
astrology, its
direct influence
of the stars and
planets on earthly
events.

The celestial Llama
disappeared at
midnight to drink
water from the Earth
to prevent flooding.

Entering the force-field
of the other world, is
where her spiritual pulse
is felt the most. She
travels the same path
of spiritual progress.

Supporting the holistic
Gaia, all life is interrelated,
only moving forward with
a balanced coexistence with
the environment.

The Hermetic Emerald Tablet
links both spiritual and physical
to living nature and to the
heavens---the source of wisdom
and understanding.

As for me, I am the wild
unicorn who has a desire
to lay my horn in her lap
at the new, full, and waning,
the phases of the moon.


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Old 07-31-2006, 07:45 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hey SAGESWEETWATER -

This is a very beautiful read - I love poetry that embraces the natural elements. But your poem entertwines the natural with the mystical - Love the very last stanza about the unicorn. Kinda speaks of just simply wanting to be one with beauty & peace, which are essentially the same thing.

Very nice piece - Thanx for sharing it!

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Old 08-07-2006, 04:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Dear Ms Sage,
Yes, these are beautiful lyrics to nature and that special someone. For me, the one word to describe this poem is "transcendent". I also get a sense of being one with your "Supreme Deity". Many mystical symbolisms in this piece that intricately ascend to your garden of Eden. I feel the peace, the tranquilness, the love, being one with her, with nature, and with yourself. I particularly love the following stanza as well as the last-------->

The celestial Llama
disappeared at
midnight to drink
water from the Earth
to prevent flooding.

Such beautiful "fluidity" in conjuction with such picturesque verbiage, leaves a smile on my poetic heart. What does the above stanza symbolize? It is magical! I am in awe of this piece, simply breathtaking Ms Sage. Thank you ever so kindly for sharing.

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