08-07-2006, 04:50 PM
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Re: Ancient Whispers: Gaia Returns
Dear Ms Sage,
Yes, these are beautiful lyrics to nature and that special someone. For me, the one word to describe this poem is "transcendent". I also get a sense of being one with your "Supreme Deity". Many mystical symbolisms in this piece that intricately ascend to your garden of Eden. I feel the peace, the tranquilness, the love, being one with her, with nature, and with yourself. I particularly love the following stanza as well as the last-------->
The celestial Llama
disappeared at
midnight to drink
water from the Earth
to prevent flooding.
Such beautiful "fluidity" in conjuction with such picturesque verbiage, leaves a smile on my poetic heart. What does the above stanza symbolize? It is magical! I am in awe of this piece, simply breathtaking Ms Sage. Thank you ever so kindly for sharing.
Painted
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