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Old 07-07-2007, 12:33 AM   #1 (permalink)
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raw attraction
chain reaction
sequence of events...
meeting by chance
mating dance
sex has many scents...
call of the wild
by the beguiled
copulation taking place...
you know the source
intercourse
supplies the human race...
some hard and fast
some slow, to last
it depends on your flavor...
no matter how
its always "wow"
when finished and you savor...
the thrills that were
for him and her
as nails scratch across backs...
to feel insane
and to drain
upon the act's climax..
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"Death makes angels of us all and gives us wings where we once had shoulders, smooth as ravens claws."
 

Old 07-07-2007, 11:47 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Serious good stuff there Scott. you do this well and in others I have seen without going into x-rating. Well done.
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Old 07-08-2007, 12:43 AM   #3 (permalink)
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thanks mike...i know most people don't enjoy smut, but when it is worded right it is a different story...as always, i appreciate the comments...thanks aagin
 

Old 07-08-2007, 08:06 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I like it... nice rhyming... easy to read...
 

Old 07-26-2007, 10:32 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Hey Checkmate! Neat write =) I love the quick + short lines, and the rhyme scheme too. Keep'em coming!

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