Creative Traditional:

[Echoes]

distant train whistles
midnight rain falls
footsteps echo
on damp asphalt

[erikestabrook]

you make haikus absolutely addictive,

so short but you make them have such a deeper meaning,
I feel this one was perfect

[Harry]

Hey Lisa

this is very visually penned, nice work!

see ya

[Echoes]

Hey Erik,


thanks so much for your kind remarks

[Echoes]

Hello there Harry


I appreciate your kind comments about my haiku


hope to talk with you soon

[Harry]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Echoes

Hello there Harry


I appreciate your kind comments about my haiku


hope to talk with you soon

your welcome Lisa


so good to read your words again

hope you'll post more here again

talk soon

[papasan22]

Great Visuals and style~!~!
Loved It~!~!
Peace@Love,
PD

[Sally Roberts]

Merry Meet Lisa:

Your haiku is flawless! I tried writing Haiku but found myself trying to add more to them. I love reading them but I tend to write longer poetry and find it difficult writing the shorter ones. Yet I challenge myself to all types of poetry.

Thanks for sharing. I am looking forward in reading more of your work.

Blessings

[Echoes]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by papasan22

Great Visuals and style~!~!
Loved It~!~!
Peace@Love,
PD

Hello Mark

thanks for your nice comments

take care

Lisa

[Echoes]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Sally Roberts

Merry Meet Lisa:

Your haiku is flawless! I tried writing Haiku but found myself trying to add more to them. I love reading them but I tend to write longer poetry and find it difficult writing the shorter ones. Yet I challenge myself to all types of poetry.

Thanks for sharing. I am looking forward in reading more of your work.

Blessings

Hi Sally

many thanks I appreciate your so kind remarks

I like to write haikus, but I do know what you mean, sometimes it feels as if they are not quite finished...