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Old 08-03-2007, 06:15 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Here, under starry heavens,
on this soft, moist belly of earth,
begins the feathered banquet, as it always has,
with frailty serving to nourish power,
with spirit taking sustenance from the infirmity of its community,
creating not just life, but vibrance,
through the eloquence of death.

Feasting on perfection, with sweet melody,
flocks of every measure, every hue
soar above, fluttering their dance of wonder,
calling their songs of delight to the blue-sky air,
filling it with the music of deliverance.

Grasses and flowers of tender tint,
a petaled rainbow that is its own promise
amid the aroma of bloom,
the scent of water warmed by the sun,
the perfume of dampened shadowy soil
caresses the senses, transports
to a place in primal memory, where energy rises.

Aged trees stand tiptoe at the edge of dark, living waters,
airing their roots, proudly displaying their source;
that source which delivers a leafy haven
to beckon winged bands in every season,
from the four winds to this sanctuary
formed by an orgasmic earth,
convulsing with her own beauty,
trembling in her reverence for her own life.
 

Old 08-04-2007, 02:48 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hi Des...I so love poems about the earth and Mother Nature...they renew ones spirit and reminds us of all the wonder around us daily...lovely poem. Thanks for sharing!!

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Old 08-04-2007, 09:31 AM   #3 (permalink)
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This is just beautiful, full of natural images, sounds, and smells. I read it several times taking in its mystery and song.

Thanks for sharing!
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Old 08-05-2007, 08:26 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I love the way you describe nature. I love nature.
*smiles*
 

Old 08-05-2007, 09:15 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Dear Patricia,

What a beautiful read to start my Sunday Morning. This was full of the beauty of nature at its best. You have woven a journey into the "natural beauty" of nature. Loved it!

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Old 08-06-2007, 08:01 PM   #6 (permalink)
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The title caught my eyes and I was
not disappointed by the poem.
It's lovely, very beautiful imagery on
nature and I love nature poems.
You did good!


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Through her I am free.
It's the only way to be,
all caught up in a mystery!
Born with full moon fever,
I can make you a believer!
For I am the moonchild,
truly born to be wild!
 

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